What went well You discussed the economic issues You identified s36 and Norgan You included some analysis but needed to support it with academic source material. Generally good referencing in the bibliography What could be improved (a) You needed to cover private sales and Human Rights. (b) You needed to develop s36 and the economic issues. (c) It was too detailed on pre AJA position. You did not need to include for example much on the cases or the Payne Committee. (d) You also could have cut out the Pre Action Protocol which we have not covered this year. (e) Has the position in Northern Ireland changed since 1996? (f) Use the most up to date material you can. There are lots in the reading list and on the formative activity. Being out of date meant that you didn't cover some of the relevant issues. (g) You needed to explain why the lender could take possession without a court order in Ropaigealach. (a) Make sure your sources are up to date. These are way too old. (b) back up your points with authorities (eg business property p3) (c) Put edition numbers in for the books. (d) Footnotes - first name and then surname. (e) Send a plan to a tutor or come along to a drop in session to discuss what you are covering. The main issue here is that you didn't cover enough content. 48%